Field Notes - will be a place I post new photos I am considering, studying & so forth. These are not presently images you will find on my website. If you missed them here are Field Notes-1.
One of the things going on in most images below is a concentration on using the patterns, shapes, positions, repetitions of arms and hands. While I am posting this stuff I thought it might be of help to others if I tell you what I am after.
(So info in these will be intended for teaching, - hopefully some people will find the information of value)
Please drop me a comment and let me know if this helps anyone. I do not know everything about photography, but am happy to pass on things I have learned.
(I enjoy the sense of mystery I get from the man in the black suit, it to me is as if he dropped in from another place maybe an agent. Why is he here in a tranquil setting? I have enjoyed the hand full of times a person has shown up in a photo they seem to not belong too.)
Liked this one initially, but I am about to reject it. This "mind changing" "post post letdown" will be part of the "Field Notes" personality.
I find it interesting when the compositions utilize multiple triangles in the structure, certainly not a conscious thing on my part, these events happen much to quickly for that.
(Sometimes the Gods do help us. "Neptunium" Bicycle?)
(Another person who seems dropped into the photo for me (it must be his stillness next to the movement of the others that increases this sensation I get). I enjoy studying the stride of people in my images. It is crucial to me from one frame to the next which one has the tension or spring in the movement.)
(I enjoy the diagonal line implied by the boys arm but more so the subtle reinforcement of that diagonal by his turned gaze. I often hope and try to tie together like colors running from front, middle and rear ground together.)
(Here I enjoy the triangle created between the foreground women's arm and body and the one created by her head and arm forcing a triangle to appear top left. If it was not for the triangle created by the man (RT) by his elbow and arm the image would fail for me. It is nice luck, serendipity or synchronicity (chose your poison) that his bag is red and there are red shapes in the mid ground by the column. As an image maker I ask myself what would happen as I begin to remove these things from the photograph. The man white tee shirt (RT) on beach and his forward lean and movement also help to pull the eye to the (RT) side of the image, especially important because the image is loaded heavily left. White also pulls the eye strongly to itself. The other thing that works here is the blue shirt (LT) side and the blue stripped shorts (RT) side.)